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Hi gents,
This is looking good. These are the biggest things to consider:
1. The copy is not up long enough to read. Slow down the frames that have copy and make sure that they can be read at a normal beat.
2. Elaborate with words on how Cheryl, Joe, and Kevin feel. You say this is how Cheryl feels but you merely show a pic. Is the saying something? For example. Cheryl: "I wonder what movies are playing" Joe: "I'm craving IN-N-OUT burger" Kevin: "Let's hit the surf".
3. Will you be animating the interactive window and iPhone app? Right now they are underwhelming as static images.
4. I recommend zooming in full screen on the micro site. It's hard to read what the site features are currently. Do a zoom while you are beginning the site interaction.
5. I think your idea would be reinforced even more if you show the infinity loop bursting at the seems at the end. As more people populate it.
That's all. Nice work. Now it's just down to crafting. -Jon
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