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Instructor: Laura Lahti & Jon Patrick Clifton
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- cube - ashita
- Jose&Ashita_AAU
- Jose&Jac_Flip
- Terri & Jac go to AAU
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- last movie
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- Every minute is momentous - Flip
- Terri_FLIP
- Flip Rivera ...
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- Terri_CUBE
- Terri & Jac & the AofAU
- AAU_Gina_Anne Final PDF
- AAU_Yoon & Jessie
- Cube_Yoon & Jessie
- AAU_Brian & Jack
- Anne Marie and Gina Cube Final PDF
- Carolina and Gina Flip Final PDF
- AAU: Designing Artists_Fathan and Sean C
- AAU_IRIS-DANIEL-FRANK
- FLIP - BRIAN & DANIEL
- CUBE_carolina_mel
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- AAU_carolina_mel
- FLIP_mel_iris
- Gina & Carolina Flippin' - Network of You
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- AAU_Anne_Gina
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- Flip_Sean C & Yoon
- EidaTan_NissanCube_revision
- 'All you need is love', and a cure for Aids.
- EidaTan_AAU_revision
- AshitaEida_Flip_Demo
- Anne_Gina_Cube_Demo
- Carolina and Gina Flip Demo
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- Nissan Cube - Fathan & Sean C
- flip_Daniel & Brian
- AAU Designing Artists Demo
- Target is coming to SF for 2 days.
- OutsideIn 12/9: Patrick Coyne from CommArts
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Hi Brian and Daniel,
This is a good start. But there are some things to consider. Overall the demo drags meaning it is very slow and needs some energy. Daniel, i like what you and Iris did for Cube and AAU as far as it having a nice beat visually. TRry to incorporate that here.
1. Add music.
2. On the frames with copy you are holding too long. Frames should be up just long enough for someone to read it at a normal cadence.
3. Target, executions pages are too copy heavy. It's always best just to show the execution rather than explaining them in words.
4. Consider trimming the target frames to three or four sentences with pics.
5. Do a zoom in and pan on the web pages.
6. Elaborate visually on what's to come after the Winter Games.
7. Overall this demo is running too long. I think after the above revisions are implemented it'll be at a good length.
Keep it going. -Jon
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