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Instructor: Laura Lahti & Jon Patrick Clifton
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- cube - ashita
- Jose&Ashita_AAU
- Jose&Jac_Flip
- Terri & Jac go to AAU
- No title
- last movie
- No title
- No title
- Every minute is momentous - Flip
- Terri_FLIP
- Flip Rivera ...
- Cube Rivera ...
- aau_Rivera ...
- Terri_CUBE
- Terri & Jac & the AofAU
- AAU_Gina_Anne Final PDF
- AAU_Yoon & Jessie
- Cube_Yoon & Jessie
- AAU_Brian & Jack
- Anne Marie and Gina Cube Final PDF
- Carolina and Gina Flip Final PDF
- AAU: Designing Artists_Fathan and Sean C
- AAU_IRIS-DANIEL-FRANK
- FLIP - BRIAN & DANIEL
- CUBE_carolina_mel
- FLIP_BRIAN & DANIEL
- AAU_carolina_mel
- FLIP_mel_iris
- Gina & Carolina Flippin' - Network of You
- Flip_Mel+Iris
- AAU_Anne_Gina
- CUBE_mel_carolina
- AAU_mel_carolina
- FLIP_Sean & Jessie
- AAU_Javier & Sean
- Nissan Cube - Fathan & Sean C
- Flip Mino - Fathan & Anne Marie
- Cube_Javier & Sean
- Flip_Sean C & Yoon
- EidaTan_NissanCube_revision
- 'All you need is love', and a cure for Aids.
- EidaTan_AAU_revision
- AshitaEida_Flip_Demo
- Anne_Gina_Cube_Demo
- Carolina and Gina Flip Demo
- Jose&Cherko_CubeMobileDevice
- Quicksilver The Spot
- AAU_HIDDEN TALENT_IRIS, DANIEL, FRANK
- Flip - Fathan & Anne
- Nissan Cube - Fathan & Sean C
- flip_Daniel & Brian
- AAU Designing Artists Demo
- Target is coming to SF for 2 days.
- OutsideIn 12/9: Patrick Coyne from CommArts
- Eidatan_AAU (revised)
- Call Wilderness Man and talk to him through your c...
- Nissan Cube_Creativer_Iris, Daniel, Frank
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1 comment:
Eida,
This is a good start however your executions need to be explained more.
1. You jump to the iphone app without setting up how it works.
2.Same for the banner. Inform the audience that they can put their head in the scene.
3. You also need to communicate how these components connect and live on the site.
4. About he site. There is no explanation about what the building is all about. Is it built over a matter of days? How does the invite tie to the building?
Overall, this demo is too fast. Slow down and make sure that this campaign is clearly communicated from execution to execution.
Nice start. Let me know if you have an questions.
-Jon
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