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Instructor: Laura Lahti & Jon Patrick Clifton
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6 comments:
Hi there, nice work. Here are my thoughts.
1. What's missing is a challenge statement. Something like...'with social media and the expanding use of mobile phones. people are forgetting how to relate to people' Then you go to your big idea ' We are providing you...'
2. Hold longer on the title frame. Goes away too quickly.
3. On the 'The Tools' frame, i recommend zooming in and panning through each square. That way the copy can be read and it's more impactful.
4. I recommend going in tighter on the iPhone apps. You've worked so hard designing them, show them off:-)
5. CubePlanner overlaps the iPhone app. Copy is hard to read.
6. I recommend introducing the micro site by way of the CubePlanner and then finish with the book. Right now it's weird to introduce a single component of the site (Planner) and then the book, and then back to the site. You want to streamline how you bridge the iPhone to the site.
7. Here's an idea. Since the apps live on the site, what if you introduce the site first and then the apps?
8. So maybe this order?
Site>cube planner>i phone apps>book
9. I'd like to see you beef up 'With these tools...' by connecting it to the challenge at the end.
That's it. Nice work so far. -Jon
One more thing.
10. There is a weird line thing at the 1:28 mark in the demo. Two right angles that are left after the book animation.
Thanks for the feedback, Jon.
The calendar overlap and the weird right angles that are left over are the glitches that appeared when I converted the file from .fla to .mov.
The original flash files don't have either of those problems. Once The demo is edited to your suggestions, is it possible to show the Flash demo in class rather than the Movie file?
actually i am having the similar problem (new glitches for each conversion)...
i reboot my computer and do it again. And tada it works. (finger x)
and anyhow, the animation looks good.
Hmmm... More cubes.
ps you're welcome.
Also, my captcha is "gynulat." The baby formula for vagina-centric mothers? You decide.
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