Interactive Two: Daniel_Iris

Friday, October 23, 2009

Jac said...: This is really well art directed. I would look at calling "mouse tracing" something more artsy, but I like this idea.; October 25, 2009 at 1:18 AM
464.01 Interactive Advertising said...: Hi Iris & Danny,

This is really looking good.

Here are my only comments.

1. I'd keep crafting the tagline. Is it 'find your hidden talent'? That works well as a call to act as well. Keep thinking about it.

2. For your widget, make the drawing on the easel more stylized like the drawings on the mug and t's.

3. Grammar issues

P.15,
Frame 3
Just say 'Do i have talent?'

Frame 4
'Your talent is just hiding beneath your everyday life.'

Frame 6
'Let us find your hidden talent'

Frame 9
'How it works.'

4. I'd like to see how this idea carries over to the iPhone, or other mobile phones. Is it a 'talent finder' that beeps when it fins talent?

5. Biggest comment. Be careful how you communicate 'mouse tracing'. People get scared when it comes to being tracked online. The whole big brother thing. Find a way to use language that is friendlier and not so spyware-ish.

We can discuss more in class on Wed.

-Jon; October 26, 2009 at 3:46 PM

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