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Instructor: Laura Lahti & Jon Patrick Clifton
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Hi Jose,
Here are some comments. We can go into more detail in class.
1. On slide 7, you always want to talk in the present tense. Instead of 'We had an idea' you want to say, 'Our idea is to...'
2. What happened to the two spokespeople who are going to talk back and forth. One was going to be a Nissan guy who is admonishing the claims of the Mobile Device nay-sayers. I think we talked about it being a YouTube channel.
3. In phase 1 (Part 1), print would be a good component. See what you can come up with.
4. Seems like the protesters fit better in Phase 1. They are protesting against the Cube being a Mobile Device. They would be traveling the streets ala Frank Chu, the 12 galaxies guy who walks up and down Market all day.
That's it for now. Begin working your idea into demo format.
-Jon
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