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Instructor: Laura Lahti & Jon Patrick Clifton
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- GinaAnne_AAU
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- No Mo' Man Cancer
- thepartydriver - ashita
- Jac Cube
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- Terri and Jac AAU
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Gina & Anne,
Thanks for posting a revision. Here are a few comments.
1. On the challenge. Let's soften the language around AAU being a money-making empire. I know i said as much in the brief but Elisa will be seeing your PDF so best to add some honey to it.
2. Let's put any of the microsite apps, such as the Epicenter search, in a browser window so we can distinguish it from just a presentation slide.
3. I think you should show where the apps live on the site.
4. Please show what the epicenter cafe looks like.
5. Please write a conclusion that solidifies how strongly your idea ties to the challenge.
That's it for now.
-Jon
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